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Jyn Erso needed more depth. Show a bit more backstory, some actual attachment to her father. Rather than the 2 minutes they were on screen together.
Even Saw Gerrera (who's a rebel legend, even having his legacy cemented in new canon) should've had more exposition and story. No reason they couldn't have written him on Jyns' Team.
The characters needed work on Rogue one. The movie could've been damn good if they did those things.
No one cares if a movie is 3 hours long, especially not with strong characters engrossing you in their story. Since not everything is action, action, cgi, cgi, charcter development is a must. People say Rogue One was slow for the majority of its run time. Reason being weak characters. They could've done the same damn things and expanded the characters with detailed writing and no one would've been bored.
I actually suspect that the reshoots on Rogue One provided the "work" the characters needed as for me they were the best thing we've seen in SW since the originals.
In Jyn's case you already have a couple of flashbacks showing he attachment to her father plus a lot of scenes that obviously show it as well. That meeting early on with the rebel leaders is I think a classic case of building a character well though performance akin to a lot of Empire Strikes Back(think Leia's sideline look at Han early in that film). You can clearly see the attachment there in her reactions(most not dialog) to hearing about her fathers involvement. Plus of course you then get the message from him and her reaction to it before actually meeting him.
I think they made a wise decision cutting saw down personally. He's not a lead character and we get as much of him as we need to tell Jyn's story, don't think a load of flashbacks to her connection to him are really needed to sell that.
Again Rogue One to me felt like a film that had been polished to the same degree as the originals, focusing in on the more interesting stories and not overloading you with extraneous detail/action as the lucas prequels and current sequels have. The Last Jedi does to me feel like it could have been a decent first draft of a script that would have benefited from a lot of work on it cutting away the less interesting material and focusing more on the most effective aspects(Kylo's story).
The originals and Rogue One are much smarter in what they infer and don't show IMHO putting the focus in the correct places, that is the story of the lead chaarcters and building the setting. The prequels/sequels on the other hand get way too caught up in detail that would have been much more effective left in the background., Lucas with all his political plotting, these films with all there constant twists and turns for the sake of it.