i havent listened to either song you mentioned but you can have two good tracks and still be qualified for the "entire discog is pathetic" statement. his remixes are so corny, hes on some "look how I murk those dumb trap mumblers' beats" its such a losers mentality and it simply doesnt work anymore, in 2017/18 you gotta craft your own song and just "rapping hard and fast" for the sake of it isnt impressive, we've already had hundreds of rappers who can do that. either you bring something new to the table or you're out.
when you take away the facade of rapping fast, theres really not that much more substance to anything joyner is spitting than that of the ppl he criticises. fast rapping is played out and makes a song pretty much unlistenable, it has no aux value. i dont even fuck wit big sean like that but he pretty much ethered a lot of these youtube rappers:
And I'm just not impressed by you nibbas rapping fast
Who sound like one big asthma attack but trash when I’m rapping it back
Who you put in your top five and claim they the savior of rap
also dont like how the guy is so pretentious like this dude rly be getting on gucci gang/bank account type beats (most popular in the scene) and then talk about how hes too good to make a hit song like fuck off bro lmaoo
these are the god tier lyrics ya'll are fawning over?
What the fuck happened to Jay Electronica? I wonder if he still got it or not
Whatever happened to Elzhi?
Whatever happened to
Meth? What happened to
Beans? Whatever happened to
Lauryn?
What happened to
Banks? Tell me what happened to
Bleek
What the fuck happened to
Mos? What happened to
Missy?
Nibba, what happened to
Ghost? Whatever happened to
Cube?
What up with
Common? What the fuck, where did they go?
Tell me what happened to
Budden's, what about
Luda?
cmon bruh hes smothering the beat and doing it using cheap gimmicks while patting himself on the back for being so much better than these teen trap rappers lmao, at least the 21 song u can bump in the whip, or at the party, and just vibe out too
21's bank account is so Simple even a full crew high out of their mind cruising L rides would notice, you're just mad at the other guy lol
telling me it's better, smh
Quick test: in battle rap, what happens to the artist who starts repeating themselves instead of making new bars? They get eaten alive, because that's not diversity of statement.
21 songs are intentionally a k-hole of creativity and that's cool if you're into that because you just want to roll to some lowkey dumbed down L ride music but don't lie to yourself trying to say it's the best version of rap, or better than lyricism in rap. That's straight up childish
Joyner gave that track about 4 different sections each with their own flow, went from his mom's abortion (just like Game did on 50's hate it or love it, but you probably hate it here right?) to flipping meter on what it's like to leave the oven open when the heat is out, to repping classic players in the rap game wishing the industry still wanted them
His end rhymes aren't ever dumb for a machine-gun rap style, so saying his lyrics aren't complicated is just showing me how salty you are about him personally, and you take it out on solid modern poetry structure with large doses of irony sprinkled throughout, critiques of industry
Backwords:
"I've been snatchin' purses while I'm rapping
In the back of churches I'm a backwards person
I ain't laughin' don't you act absurd
And I've been havin' urges ain't no passion
Don't you bastards think you bad at cursin'
I've been bad since birth and slapping nurses asses
Takin' percs I've been urgin' for a certain action
Got a nervous itch in a serpents kitchen drinking captains
While I'm servin' children different words that's spillin' out the cabinets
In a hurt position its absurd addiction got me laughin'
Spit fast gonna run with impact until your wrist crampin'
Break your kitkat while you play with your kids back
I'm Chris Hanson
[Reversed:]
Laughin' at a addiction absurd in this position
Hurt inside of cabinets spillin' out words that are fairly different
Servin' children while the captains drinking in a serpents kitchen
Itchin' from a nervin' action got served by takin' percs
Ass nurses slappin' since birth and I've been cursin' bad and you
Think you bastards got passion but ain't no urge you havin'
Been absurd action don't be laughin' ain't no person backwards
I'm in churches in the back rappin' while I'm purses snatchin,
I've been chasin' rappers down with pencils paper books and stencils
Written verses while I pack the pistols in the back of rentals
I wrote my dads initials, then laughed as I passed it in to
I've been half demented breaking shit down to half a sentence
Fuck the rap Olympics I murdered the past contenders
I cooked their ass and grilled them now you can eat that for dinner
And I used to laugh at
s who act like
s with feelings
Till' I packed gentlemen packages filled with acid venom
I bought a toy gun with some bullets of plastic in them
Explosives with matches lit em' and left a few fragments in them
I never packed a mac in the back of a Ac(ura) or Sentra or
Lexus with gas unless it’s a Benz with a stack of Benjamins
[Reversed:]
Benjamins and stacks of Benz and gas with a Lexus or Sentra act in the back with a mac that I packed in it
The fragments slit matches explosives and plastic bullets from a gun toy I just bought for you
s is actin reckless
Venom acids filled with the packages in them packagin' em
s just feelings just actin while
s laughin
Eatin dinner siezed in the grill and cooked their asses while contestenders pass 'em murder olympics rap past them
Sentence down breaking deminsions in half essentials
I past and laughed at the pixels I wrote in Dads initials
In the back of rentals I'm pistol packing a stack of stencils in the book papers of papers and pencils and a rapper chasin' a
- hold up
I'm a same
that fizzled poppa a ratchet on him
Yeah that same
that took a piss in your Arizona
That same
to put acetone in a bag a soap
And then sold it for $40 some pussy and half of soda
And I never payed attention to rappers who acted bogus
Who lie and say they rich in their songs but their ass is homeless
And try to throw dirt on my name that's a passive quota
Till I grab it throwem' and bashem' and laugh when their asses over
Fuckem' hard go hustle hard with the hustlars
Cut their jugular so you choke on your tongue and jaw
And I've never been a gangster or one to trouble naw
But I'm good with my knuckles punch through a brick and leave dust in awe
[Reversed:]
All in dust leave brick punch for my knuckles naw
But I'm naw No trouble wanted a gangster I never cut
Your jaw and tongue choke on your jugular
Cuttin' hustlers with the hustler hustle hard
Fuckin' hard over ass laughin' bashin' backfoldem' crackem'
Till the quota passem' trashem' and laugh over
Homeless ass when they saw his trash crack closer
Bogus actors who rappin' over the track holdem'
Sold half a pussy a dollar 40 a sold it
For some soap and acetone in a bath and I blast both of em
Arizona piss that I took in the glass of cola
Then got ratchet and popped him and fizzled him back the soda"
I wouldn't be surprised if Sherm/Syrup/Pills fans hate that shit
Because they love 21 and pump
Rap Industry doesn't have to pander to drug zombie culture tho, that isn't what its greatest names in rap did