@Robocok
You're asking for criticism so I'm going to go all out.
PROS:
* Looks like you probably started out doing boxing, and are just getting into MT and are trying things out. I see you experimenting with angles while punching and you have a general sense about how combinations should flow.
* It's good that you can be creative with your striking and movement, exploring different techniques and ways to execute them will keep benefiting you in the long run.
Now for the not so nice stuff:
FOOTWORK:
* When you advance or retreat, you're doing a lot of quick little hops. The end result is you're sailing in a straight line for a long period of time, standing tall, which despite what you're trying to achieve will make you less mobile and easier to hit.
Instead - use singular powerful movements to advance and retreat, you should not be stepping in or out more than once in a row before or after strikes.
* I said this above but really it applies to all situations: don't spam the same movement over and over. Gliding in and out in long lines is bad. Make bigger, more forceful steps and change direction often. Get lower and use your thighs more.
* Don't be so tall when advancing or retreating, you lose the ability to quickly change direction when a threat or opportunity presents itself. Keep the legs bent and chin down. These movements are when you're most vulnerable, put extra focus on being safe during them, even if it's boring to drill it pays off.
PUNCHING:
* You're arm punching for the most part. Sometimes you plant and turn your hips, but not enough. The arm is purely for delivery of the force your core rotation generates, so focus on generating that force by rotating your core and let the arm just be the messenger.
* You tend to hop out of your punches also. If you want to get away from the opponent after striking, try to angle out left or right, or create that distance with long strikes before disengaging in a straight line.
KICKING:
* With your kicks, you're turning your lead foot on some of them, but not all, and you're also stepping in on a straight line which isn't great. When throwing the right kick, step forward and out to your left, and also turn your left foot outward at least 45 degrees. You're rangy (stylistically) with long limbs, using proper MT footwork will let you really take advantage of all that leverage and get your body behind the kicks.
* I can tell you're not getting your weight into them also because of the way you retract the leg. There should be minimal bend in the knee throughout the whole motion and you should be turning your hip into and out of the strike, not flexing and extending the hip or knee joints a great deal.
KNEES:
* Looks like you haven't been taught technique, there's a lot *not* happening there that should be. I'll just say you should learn the technique before you try to add them to your repertoire.