FLOOD

StonedLemur

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Pound the walls, drumbeat.
Tell the story on this sheet...topple the empire just to watch it fall, the agents are on your telephone call.

Tip slap tap clap, make the yeti come out of his cave slowly, does he know me...do I care.?
Hot ice, and cold flame turn things into a puddle of mud, slaps with a thud, and now I say... what's up bud.

Climb the tower and pull off the pinnacle to stab the clouds...it bleeds rain...it really pours down and the flood has begun.
Tell him to stop or we'll all die here drowning in the waters of all that is going through our world.

It will not stop, he continues to stab the clouds until lightning strikes 12...am...pm...days have gone by as we're floating on random pieces of wood, maybe I should...tie my t-shirt to this thing so we can move a little faster.

Maybe I did, maybe its done... what's that coming from the clouds?...maybe its the sun.
It takes years for it to dry out, I scream and shout...but we're all dead here.

(End scene)

~SL
 
the first two lines feel like really a beginning of something, interesting flow of words, pretty great
but after that... like someone else finished
 
the first two lines feel like really a beginning of something, interesting flow of words, pretty great
but after that... like someone else finished

Yeah, my mind took a turn on me sir lol.
 
A departure from the common theme of love but still infused with a lot of naturalistic imagery and metaphor.
I can't tell if it's railing against society, the government, the world or nothing at all. There's no sense of rage but harsh words like 'stab' stick out like a knife (ironically).

I also hope the mention of a yeti turns this into a 30 page bigfoot discussion.
 
Sounds like love making 101. Don't forget to put down some towels.
 
A departure from the common theme of love but still infused with a lot of naturalistic imagery and metaphor.
I can't tell if it's railing against society, the government, the world or nothing at all. There's no sense of rage but harsh words like 'stab' stick out like a knife (ironically).

I also hope the mention of a yeti turns this into a 30 page bigfoot discussion.

Lmao, yeah I just wrote and let it go where it wanted to go.
The yeti stabbing the clouds is where it really turned on me I think.

Im pretty sure its all that you mentioned and yet somehow more or less nothing.
 
Spit that shit out like it's lava, keep that flame alive and live life.

It's disastrous dhiarrea anyways and in that
a dog will still find some beauty.

Keep up your work and express!

I love to see some poetry on sherdog!
 
Spit that shit out like it's lava, keep that flame alive and live life.

It's disastrous dhiarrea anyways and in that
a dog will still find some beauty.

Keep up your work and express!

I love to see some poetry on sherdog!


https://forums.sherdog.com/threads/painted.4271304/

https://forums.sherdog.com/threads/nobody.4270069/



https://forums.sherdog.com/threads/angel.4269363/


https://forums.sherdog.com/threads/regal-feathers.4268046/

https://forums.sherdog.com/threads/sunshine-sunset.4266942/


Read these you'll like these a lot more.
 
Spit that shit out like it's lava, keep that flame alive and live life.

It's disastrous dhiarrea anyways and in that
a dog will still find some beauty.

Keep up your work and express!

I love to see some poetry on sherdog!

Let me know what you think of the ones I just sent your way sir.
 
It's fallen angels taking tick tock clocks.
 
If it keeps on rainin', levee's goin' to break
If it keeps on rainin', levee's goin' to break

When the levee breaks, I'll have no place to stay

Mean old levee taught me to weep and moan, Lord

Mean old levee taught me to weep and moan
It's got what it takes to make a mountain man leave his home
 
If it keeps on rainin', levee's goin' to break
If it keeps on rainin', levee's goin' to break

When the levee breaks, I'll have no place to stay

Mean old levee taught me to weep and moan, Lord

Mean old levee taught me to weep and moan
It's got what it takes to make a mountain man leave his home


Good tune
 
If it keeps on rainin', levee's goin' to break
If it keeps on rainin', levee's goin' to break

When the levee breaks, I'll have no place to stay

Mean old levee taught me to weep and moan, Lord

Mean old levee taught me to weep and moan
It's got what it takes to make a mountain man leave his home

Heres a few you might like sir.


https://forums.sherdog.com/threads/painted.4271304/

https://forums.sherdog.com/threads/nobody.4270069/



https://forums.sherdog.com/threads/angel.4269363/


https://forums.sherdog.com/threads/regal-feathers.4268046/

https://forums.sherdog.com/threads/sunshine-sunset.4266942/
 
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